Writing: Prompted poetry

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Today in Writing (Hur 3) we were given a 'Who, what, where, when' prompt. We were instructed to write some sort of writing involving these 4 things, A person and a beast, a light source, 2:30 am and a dark forest. Here is the final product of my poem. If you enjoy it or have any feedback for me, please comment.

Walking through a dark forest,

Trees looming over me,

Leaves under my feet crunching,

This feeling is overwhelming.

I hear a noise,

My steps freeze,

‘Its nothing’ I thought,

‘It's just a gentle breeze’.

I continue walking,

My pace is speeding up,

My torch seems to go flat,

And I don’t have a backup.

Time seems to go on forever,

I look down at my phone

2:30 am, an uncomfortable time

I hate being alone

I can almost see the end of this dark and dreary forest,

But something stops me, though I don't want to stay,

‘Stay here, we’re your friends now,’

This voice seems to sway.

A hand reaches out to me,

‘Stay with me’ It pled

So I took it by the hand,

And into the darkness I was led.

Heroes and villains writing

 This term in hur 4 we have been writing a story based on the theme "Heroes and Villains". We planed our story on a slideshow and then we wrote it in a shared document. I never finished mine but I plan to at some point. here is my plan and story so far.

It all started on a peaceful wednesday evening just as the sun was tipping over the horizon as the village of the sun was packing up for the night as everyone fell asleep not knowing what would happen the next day.

As the sun rose the next day, Phoenix got up and got ready for training. they slowly put on their armour and then dragged them self to the kitchen to eat breakfast, Cyra was already there making breakfast for them all,

“Morning Phoenix”

Blaze exclaimed,

“Uhh what umm, Hi Blaze, whats for breakfast”

Phoenix replied,

Cyra said,

“Pancakes”

“Mmm yummy”

Blaze said excitedly.

Once Cyra had finished making the pancakes, Phoenix and blaze devoured them in 5 minutes and went out to train,

“I’ll be out in 10 Minutes”

Cyra yelled across the room.

Meanwhile in the forest the starclan was planning trying to figure out a way to destroy the sun clan. After thinking for a while Shadow finally blurted out,

“ I know how to defeat them”

Moon Said sarcastically,

“Oh wow another one of your great plans we will totally defeat them this time”

Shadow replied,

“ No this time is will actually work, we just need to find a way to get inside the village”

Luna exclaim,

“That ain't happening unless one of us dresses up and dyes their hair like them blond and bright also we need contacts”

“ I know exactly how we can get in”

Shadow said sinisterly.

“ OH COME ON”

Moon cried

“ You said it would be the only way didn't you Moon”

Said Shadow

“Yes”

Moon replied,

Luna walked in and Laughed

“ HA HA HA HA HA HA HA what are you wearing moon”

The sun clans uniform

Moon replied

“And your hair its blond and you have blue eyes”

Luna said Laughing

SO WHAT YOUR HAIR IS BLUE”

Moon yelled

“ yeah it's pretty “

Luna said

Back in the village.

“Wow it's even a quiet month normally the star clan would have attacked at least once by now”

Phoenix exclaimed 

“DON’T JINX IT”

Blaze yelled

“Ok ok”

Phoenix said

“Excuse me”

“AHH AHH WHOS THERE”

Blaze screamed

“Oh sorry if I startled you”

Moon said in the sweetest voice she could pull of

“Who are you”

Phoenix said while pointing their sword at her

“Oh I’m um Alina nice to meet you”

Exclaimed Moon still using the sweet voice.

“Ok ima get some lunch”

Blaze said

“Hi I'm Phoenix”

Phoenix said while sticking their hand out to greet Alina ( Moon )

“Oh I know who you are”

Moon said

Moon put a bag over Phoenix's head Phoenix tried to scream but nothing came out, Moon knocked out Phoenix and dragged them back to their base

“Here they are “ 

Moon said while lugging phoenix along

“Took long enough”

Shadow scowled

“Whatever lets just get them into the cell”

Luna said

But shadow yelled before they could do anything

“Wait do they have anything on them to contact the other clan”

“Not that I can see”

Moon replied

“Good chuck them in a cell, we need to go raid a village”

“BEEP BEEP BEEP”

“THE ALARM, COME ON GUYS”

Blaze screamed

“Where's Phoenix”

Cyra exclaimed

“I don't know but it doesn't matter we have to fight”

Blaze and Cyra ran outside only to see the worst thing imaginable

With sword in hand and armor on body Blaze yelled

“BACK OF OR WE WILL CALL PHOENIX AND THEY WILL DEFEAT YOU”

“You can’t though we have them right here”

Shadow said 

“No Phoenix”

Blaze cried.

If you want them back, defeat us and this time your pity excuses for an attack is nothing without Phoenix.

Shadow called from inside the mech

Writing plan

Today in Hur 4 we worked on some things from the working from home site. I did my writing plan, I drew a few different scenes and from those scenes and plans can you guess what my story is about. I enjoyed planing because I got to draw and have fun with creativity.

The marvellous moon landing

For the past few weeks we have been writing a moment in time. The moment in time we are writing about is either being Neil Armstrong or a kid watching it on TV. I chose a kid watching it on TV.

I found it hard to do the writing I found it easy to have fun.

3,2,1, BLAST OF

Today is the day of the first amazing and spectacular moon landing, I’m
sitting on my couch drinking hot chocolate in the comfort of my own home. I can see
the shiny new rocket blasting off. I can hear the engines starting and then suddenly
“ WOOSH “ the rocket was launching. I smiled and started shouting “It launched !
It launched ! It launched. 

The rocket is about to land and I can feel a cold shiver down my spine. The house fell silent
just waiting for the legs of the ship to hit the ground. The legs hit the ground and I
sceamed” Apollo 11 mission accomplished”

I felt exhilarated It was amazing seeing the first moon landing, I felt like I was the most
special person on earth watching it happen live. I was squealing with joy as I was jumping up
and down. My face lit up as I heard “Neil Armstrong, we have landed “ 

I could see the dusty gray moon as Neil Armstrong set foot on the moon. There were lots
of craters that looked like someone had dug out holes on a gray beach. Then I heard
“one small step for man, one big leap for mankind” . I was ecstatic, a tremendous smile
stretched across my face as I squealed with excitement.

Neil Armstrong got back in the rocket and, “BSHEEW” it blasted off again falling back
down to earth and “BANG” it comes down from the atmosphere and a parachute comes
out   and slowly but surely hits the water “ SPLASH”.

It was late at night and the moon was out I looked out the window and wondered
” will I ever be an astronaut like Neil armstrong, will I ever land on the moon or Mars or
any other planet.” I went to bed with a smile on my face, dreaming of the day I would land
on the moon.

Rewriting paper scissors rock

this week in literacy we rewrote the story paper scissors rock from one of the 3 characters perspective Rock, Paper or Scissors I chose Scissors. I chose scissors because I thought his plot and story would be good.

First we watched the video and chose our character, then we wrote the story and edited it last we published it.

I found it easy to have fun but I found it hard to write the story.

Forest mayhem

It was a warm spring morning I was sneaking in the big green bushes watching rock he was
sitting on the edge of the big cliff then “CRACK” the cliff broke. When he hit the ground he saw
paper it looked like love at first site to me. I see rock stare into papers eyes and I whisper to
myself  ̈ No She is mine rock, time for revenge”

I jump out of the green bush the look on their faces was scareder than a mouse being
chased by a fox. As rock grabs papers hand and his hand crumbles into tiny pebbles I smirk
and Announce

” It's the end for both if you paper beats rock remember, that's just how it works” 

They start running with me close behind I chop everything in my
path trees and when they are cornered I walk up slowly and cut paper, she faints rock grabs a
leaf and places it under her to pick paper up rock yells ”You’ve done it now” he ran up to me
and tries to jump on me but I dodge him I Find a piece of paper and I throw it on him, It hits
him and he dies I run up to paper I grab her and throw her in the water” thats the end of that.
I run back into the bushes with a smirk on my face thinking “ That was fun I wonder who my
next victim might be . . .

The end

Rhyming

This week in literacy we wrote a story using repetitive rhyming. First we planed then we wrote it it was hard to write it but it was fun  last we made a drawing and published it.
I found it easy to have fun and be creative but I found it hard to write the story .

There once was a cat who loved the sound “rat a tat tat”.

But the sound made here a brat. The cat loved the sound rat a tat tat but it made her a brat.

The people didn’t like that she was a brat so they put him in a habitat. The cat loved the sound rat a tat tat but it made her a brat ,so now she is in a habitat.

The cat doesn’t like being in a habitat so she became an acrobat.The cat loved the sound rat a tat tat but it made her a brat, so now she is in a habitat and is an acrobat.

The cat can’t do acrobatics so she went “splat”.The cat loved the sound rat a tat tat but it made her a brat, so she is now in a habitat and is an acrobat, but she went “splat”.

The cat stopped doing acrobats because she found a soft mat. The cat loved the sound rat a tat tat but it made her a brat, so she is now in a habitat and is an acrobat, but she went “splat” so she stopped and now in a soft mat.

She got up because she saw a little Gray rat.The cat loved the sound rat a tat tat but it made her a brat, so now she is in a habitat and is an acrobat ,but she went “splat” so she stopped and is now in a soft mat spying on a grey rat.

The rat is being a copycat.The cat loved the sound rat a tat tat but it made her a brat, so now she is in a habitat and is an acrobat ,but she went “splat” so she stopped and is now in a soft mat ,spying on a grey rat and is mad because it is a copycat.

A person saw the cat and gave her a pat.The cat loved the sound rat a tat tat but it made her a brat, so now she is in a habitat and is an acrobat, but she went “splat” so she stopped and is now in a soft mat spying on a grey rat and is mad because it is a copycat but a person gave her a pat.

She found a great big hat.The cat loved the sound rat a tat tat but it made her a brat, so now she is in a habitat and is an acrobat but she went “splat” so she stopped and is now in a soft mat spying on a grey rat and is mad because the rat is a copycat but a person gave her a pat and she is wearing a big hat.

The cat got bit by a bat.The cat loved the sound rat a tat tat but it made her a brat, so now she is in a habitat and is an acrobat but she went “splat” so she stopped and is now in a soft mat spying on a grey rat and is mad because the rat is a copycat but a person gave her a pat and she is wearing a big hat and she got bit by a bat.

People come from far and wide to see her little face, and now she realises that shes not a just big disgrace, She changes back to normal and is not so paranormal and now she can be very informal for people that are round, to be themselves not someone else and believe that you can be you no matter what.

The end

The Portal

This week we wrote story's in buddy's I was with Dylan . There was a  catch to this though, we could not talk other than through comments This was really hard. First we planed, next we wrote the story, Then we edited and finally we shared it with someone else and they gave us feed back.

I found it easy to use my imagination and write the story but I found it hard not talking.


Intro One bright and sunny day Aliyah and Dylan were playing in the forest, But then a mysterious portal appeared out of nowhere. With a look of caution on their faces they slowly walked up to it to examine it. It was like a galaxy, so beautiful but it felt unnatural but in a spur of a moment it started sucking things in, taking Aliyah and Dylan with it. . .

 They appeared in a forest that looked really old and the trees were rotten, They walked along the path that was covered in leaves and then Aliyah said “ wow this is creepy “.Then Aliyah pointed at a bridge, it had a creature that look like a frog mixed with a (cat frog) out the front looking very angry. He pulled a pointy stick out of his bag and pointed it at Dylan, “WHAT DO YOU WANT” the creature shouted, Dylan said “We appeared in this world and we have to get out” he nodded and said “You have to complete this riddle to get past the bridge” he gave Dylan a piece of paper and it said “It comes once in a minute twice in a moment but never in one thousand years”. Dylan and Aliyah looked at each other with a puzzled look and Aliyah said “I’ve Got it!” and she walked up to the creature and whispered “the letter M” and the creature nodded and said “well done you may pass”. He opened the gate and said “Bye Bye” Dylan and Aliyah waved and walked through.

 Suddenly they felt a shiver down their spines and their eyes lit up rainbow and they hovered in the air then they landed back on the ground but something felt different... They looked at each other and screamed “AHHH”.They looked so different Dylan was was wearing a blue superhero outfit and could shoot Ice out his hands Aliyah was wearing a purple dress and could shoot lightning they both were wearing masks one blue one purple.

They kept walking until they found an old railroad with a dragon guarding it. Behind the Dragon they saw a crystal shard it was glowing rainbow, it was the unicorn shard. They tried to attack the dragon but it didn’t work they couldn’t figure out why . Until they realised they had to work together Aliyah said” i’ll shoot a lightning bolt” and Dylan said “I’ll shoot ice”. Aliyah shot lightning and Dylan shot ice It hit the dragon and “BANG” the dragon fell dead Aliyah said “with the power of teamwork we can do anything“ then Dylan said “ your so cheesy” and so they jumped on top of the dragon and did the floss to celebrate. After they finished flossing they ran over to the unicorn shard, grabbed it, held it up and they yelled “TAKE US BACK” and they teleport back to their world .“That was fun!” said Aliyah they ran inside to their parents and told them all about it but they didn’t believe them, Aliyah and Dylan never played in that forest again…

Pigeon Impossible

Today we watched short video called Pigeon Impossible. The video was about a pigeon who just wanted to steal a bagel but set of a missile to destroy Russia instead. Walter the secret agent had to complete his mission to stop the missile from destroying Russia . He completed his task but it did not end up the way he thought it would.

There were 4 activites that we could choose from, there was creating a wanted poster, create another mission for Walter to complete, make a news report or make a comic about the video. I decided to do the wanted poster. 

I found it hard to make the pigeon but I found it easy to have fun and enjoy it.

Aliyah’s Anthology

This week in writing we have been make poems and putting them in our anthology. An anthology is a collection of poems that you either made or like. I love making poems so check every couple days for new poems. I found it easy to write the poems sand have fun, but I found it hard to find rhyming words.

Hide and seek

This week in Mr Breaches literacy we found a hiding spot and wrote either to entertain, inform of guide your readers to your hiding spot. I found it easy because I enjoy writing about anything and I like to be over dramatic. I found using different words from the thesaurus challenging.

Dear diary 20/3/19 1:55 pm

I’m playing hide and seek today I think I have a marvellous hiding spot.

Dear diary 20/3/19 2:15 pm

I’ve been hiding here for about 20 minutes now I think I’m going to win.

Dear diary 20/3/19 2:35 pm

I can hear people yelling “ where are you Aliyah”,and, I can’t find you.

Dear diary 20/3/19 3:00 pm

It has been about a hour still I am unfound.

Dear diary 20/3/19 3:45 pm

My legs are starting to hurt from standing up so long I don’t know how much longer I will last.

Dear diary 20/3/19 4:00 pm

I’m sitting down now and it’s starting to smell in here .

Dear diary 20/3/19 4:45 pm

I think everyone has left school and I am starting to get hungry and thirsty.

Dear diary 20/3/19 4:50 pm

I just realised I am an idiot I brought my diary and a pen but no food or water.

Dear diary 20/3/19 5:30 pm

I am very tired I think I will go to sleep soon.

Dear diary 20/3/19 6:00 pm

I’m going to go to sleep now But it will be very uncomfortable.

Dear diary 21/3/19 7:00 am

I just woke up and It was a very rough night

Dear diary 21/3/19 8:00 am

People are looking for me now I still can’t believe I haven't been found yet

Dear diary 21/3/19 8:30 am

The first bell just rang and I can hear rain starting to come down.

Dear diary 21/3/19 9:00 am

Everyone is inside and the teachers are doing the roll.

Dear diary 21/3/19 10:30 am

It’s morning tea and the rain has stopped.

Dear diary 21/3/19 11:00 am

The bell just rang and every one is going back inside for literacy.

Dear diary 21/3/19 12:30 pm

Everyone is coming back outside and I am about starting to worry.

Dear diary 21/3/19 1:00 pm

I got found but think I made a new world record for the longest hide and seek match ever.

Prediction

This week in Mr Breaches literacy we wrote a prediction about a image that he showed us. I found it easy because I have a really good imagination. I found finding different words to use in my story hard.

I predict that he had crazy crash and landed on a mysterious island in the middle of the deep blue sea. I think he walked one thousand miles and was running out of clean water to drink. I predict that he was getting kind of scared. I predict that he walked under a fluffy cloud and the ladder magically appeared.

I think that he is puffing from walking so far across the island. I predict that he is pondering about climbing up the mysterious ladder. I think his arm is really tired from carrying his briefcase. I think that he is confused about how it all happened.

I predict that he is going to climb up the supernatural ladder. I think that he will end up in a unnatural candy land and he will regret going up. I think he will look around and wonder how this place was made and how he was walking on a cloud.I predict that he will try and get back down, but the ladder will disappear and he will admit defeat.

Nobody hates me

This week in literacy we have been changing lyrics to the song nobody likes me to make it positive . I found it challenging and hard to write the the lyrics but I found it easy to work with my friends .                                                                                                                                                                     

  

Information report

For literacy our focus is working on different styles of writing. For our information report we had a choice between the pyramids of Egypt or the extreme weather. The most challenging thing for me was finding the facts. The easiest thing was writing it down .

Kenning poem

In writing with Mrs Mcguinnity we learnt about kenning poems . They are an old Nordic style poem they have 8 lines and always end with er .first we brain stormed a spider poem next we wrote the spider poem.Then Mrs Mcguinnity told us to write some other poems. I found it challenging to find words with er on the end but I found it easy to write how the move , act and what they eat .

Spider

A web maker

A creepy crawler

A weird jumper

A scary killer

A sneaky crawler

A fast thinker

A corner hider

A insect eater

Cat

A cute cuddler

A vicious hunter

A silly sleeper

A fast runner

A water hater

A crazy climber

A fluffy dreamer

A mouse catcher

Dog

A playful pouncer

A tail chaser

A fast sprinter

A water lover

A funny sleeper

A silly jumper

A trick learner

A treat chewer

Snake

A sneaky slitherer

A vicious hunter

A mouse eater

A fast mover

A stealth catcher

A crazy killer

A egg cracker

A rattle shaker