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Wednesday, 9 December 2020

2020 Hurumanu Learning Story

 Today in Hur 4 - poetic arts we created a learning story. A learning story is basically a reflection on your learning from the past term, in this case what we learnt from Hur 4. Here is my learning story.


  • My Learning Story


  • Hurumanu: Poetic arts                                             


  • Name: Aliyah

  • Teachers: Ds

  • Term 4

  • 2020


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  • Reflection:

  • Give at least three examples in each of the boxes below.


  • What We Did: 

  • We did some art to do with the story Sina and the eel that was based around transformation.

  • We also did some perspective drawing which is basically drawing a road, river, etc to a point where the objects and road get smaller.

  • We also did some writing around the topic heroes and villains.


  • What I Learned: 

  •  I learnt that in perspective drawing you always have to have a horizon and a point where the lines will lead.

  • I learnt how to add detail into a story using dialog.

  • I learnt how to write in a graffiti style.


  • My Favourite Part:

  • Writing about heroes and villains because it was a narrative and I could use my imagination.

  • Doing perspective drawing because I got to be artistic.

  • Sina and the eel because writing in a graffiti style is fun.


  • My Next Steps:

  •  Drawing a better background in perspective art.

  • Getting better at writing in a graffiti style.

  • Adding more types of sentences into my narrative writing.




  • CARR Values: 

  • Make a statement below describing how you showed each of our CARR values during this Hurumanu.


  • Commitment

  • I showed commitment by completing my work to my best ability.

  • Achievement

  • I showed achievement by completing all my work to a high standard.


  • Resilience

  • I kept trying and worked very hard.

  • Respect

  • I respected all my peers and teachers while working.


  • Any other comments

  • no



  • Monday, 7 December 2020

    Heroes and villains writing

     This term in hur 4 we have been writing a story based on the theme "Heroes and Villains". We planed our story on a slideshow and then we wrote it in a shared document. I never finished mine but I plan to at some point. here is my plan and story so far.


    It all started on a peaceful wednesday evening just as the sun was tipping over the horizon as the village of the sun was packing up for the night as everyone fell asleep not knowing what would happen the next day.


    As the sun rose the next day, Phoenix got up and got ready for training. they slowly put on their armour and then dragged them self to the kitchen to eat breakfast, Cyra was already there making breakfast for them all,

    “Morning Phoenix”

    Blaze exclaimed,

    “Uhh what umm, Hi Blaze, whats for breakfast”

    Phoenix replied,

    Cyra said,

    “Pancakes”

    “Mmm yummy”

    Blaze said excitedly.

    Once Cyra had finished making the pancakes, Phoenix and blaze devoured them in 5 minutes and went out to train,

    “I’ll be out in 10 Minutes”

    Cyra yelled across the room.


    Meanwhile in the forest the starclan was planning trying to figure out a way to destroy the sun clan. After thinking for a while Shadow finally blurted out,

    “ I know how to defeat them”

    Moon Said sarcastically,

    “Oh wow another one of your great plans we will totally defeat them this time”

    Shadow replied,

    “ No this time is will actually work, we just need to find a way to get inside the village”

    Luna exclaim,

    “That ain't happening unless one of us dresses up and dyes their hair like them blond and bright also we need contacts”

    “ I know exactly how we can get in”

    Shadow said sinisterly.

    “ OH COME ON”

    Moon cried

    “ You said it would be the only way didn't you Moon”

    Said Shadow

    “Yes”

    Moon replied,

    Luna walked in and Laughed

    “ HA HA HA HA HA HA HA what are you wearing moon”

    The sun clans uniform

    Moon replied

    “And your hair its blond and you have blue eyes”

    Luna said Laughing

    SO WHAT YOUR HAIR IS BLUE”

    Moon yelled

    “ yeah it's pretty “

    Luna said


    Back in the village.

    “Wow it's even a quiet month normally the star clan would have attacked at least once by now”

    Phoenix exclaimed 

    “DON’T JINX IT”

    Blaze yelled

    “Ok ok”

    Phoenix said

    “Excuse me”

    “AHH AHH WHOS THERE”

    Blaze screamed

    “Oh sorry if I startled you”

    Moon said in the sweetest voice she could pull of

    “Who are you”

    Phoenix said while pointing their sword at her

    “Oh I’m um Alina nice to meet you”

    Exclaimed Moon still using the sweet voice.

    “Ok ima get some lunch”

    Blaze said

    “Hi I'm Phoenix”

    Phoenix said while sticking their hand out to greet Alina ( Moon )

    “Oh I know who you are”

    Moon said

    Moon put a bag over Phoenix's head Phoenix tried to scream but nothing came out, Moon knocked out Phoenix and dragged them back to their base

    “Here they are “ 

    Moon said while lugging phoenix along

    “Took long enough”

    Shadow scowled

    “Whatever lets just get them into the cell”

    Luna said

    But shadow yelled before they could do anything

    “Wait do they have anything on them to contact the other clan”

    “Not that I can see”

    Moon replied

    “Good chuck them in a cell, we need to go raid a village”


    “BEEP BEEP BEEP”

    “THE ALARM, COME ON GUYS”

    Blaze screamed

    “Where's Phoenix”

    Cyra exclaimed

    “I don't know but it doesn't matter we have to fight”

    Blaze and Cyra ran outside only to see the worst thing imaginable


    With sword in hand and armor on body Blaze yelled

    “BACK OF OR WE WILL CALL PHOENIX AND THEY WILL DEFEAT YOU”

    “You can’t though we have them right here”

    Shadow said 

    “No Phoenix”

    Blaze cried.

    If you want them back, defeat us and this time your pity excuses for an attack is nothing without Phoenix.

    Shadow called from inside the mech


    Friday, 7 August 2020

    Parihaka facts

    For the past few weeks in Hur 5, we have been making DLO's ( digital learning objects ) about Parihaka.
    I made mine with a friend of mine called Reuben. We made an animation in which I hope you like it.

    Thursday, 25 June 2020

    PE : Weight



    My number is 21
    Activity
    Weight 
    Repeats
    Supermans
    2120
    Push-ups
    2110
    Planks
    2112
    skipping2190
    burpys2120
    sit ups2110

    Tuesday, 26 May 2020

    My Favourite animal

    I have written a poem specifically a haiku poem. A haiku is a Japanese poem traditionally about nature but nowadays it can be about anything. Haiku's also have syllables and 3 lines line one has 5 then line 2 has 7 line 3 has 5



    Through sapphire waves
    glide leap bound with abandon
    the sea acrobats

    The Creation Of Tuna

    Today in Hur 4 we read The creation of tuna and got asked 5 questions and I am going to answer them.

    1. What problem did tuna face
    The land he was in was to dry and he got caught and cut up.

    2. Maori vocabulary
    Tipua means supernatural
    hinaki means eel basket

    3. What type of animal is tuna?
    Tuna is a eel

    4. compare the book and video . What are some differences?
    The book has very colourful pictures but the video is more like a sketch
    The book is more kid friendly but the video is more accurate

    5. The style of art I prefer is
    The book
    because it is more cartoon and colourful

    Tuesday, 19 May 2020

    Writing plan

    Today in Hur 4 we worked on some things from the working from home site. I did my writing plan, I drew a few different scenes and from those scenes and plans can you guess what my story is about. I enjoyed planing because I got to draw and have fun with creativity.