I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Showing posts with label strong words. Show all posts
Showing posts with label strong words. Show all posts
Thursday, 8 November 2018
Information report
For literacy our focus is working on different styles of writing. For our information report we had a choice between the pyramids of Egypt or the extreme weather. The most challenging thing for me was finding the facts. The easiest thing was writing it down .
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Thursday, 1 November 2018
Wanted
This week for literacy we have been told to make a wanted poster . I have made one about my teacher Mrs Jack I found it hard to make the photo but I found it easy to write how she makes my day .
Wednesday, 17 October 2018
Would you rather 2
This week in literacy we are using a would you rather question to show why we would make a decision . One of the questions were would you rather find the cure for cancer or be famous . I found it easy to come up with what question I was going to chose but I found it hard to come up with reasons .
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Tuesday, 16 October 2018
Would you rather
This week in literacy we are using a would you rather question to show why we would make this decision . One of the questions were would you rather be able to become invisible or be able to fly . I found it easy to come up with what question I was going to chose but I found it hard to come up with reasons .
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Monday, 3 September 2018
my disgusting dinner
or the past term my literacy class have been writing poems we have wrote
chinquain poems limericks acrostic poems , triplet poems and my favourite
poems my disgusting dinner. I found coming up with ideas at first hard but I
found having fun easy .
chinquain poems limericks acrostic poems , triplet poems and my favourite
poems my disgusting dinner. I found coming up with ideas at first hard but I
found having fun easy .
Tuesday, 28 August 2018
Fire poem
for the past term my literacy class have been writing poems we have wrote chinquain poems limericks acrostic poems and triplet poems . I found coming up with ideas at first hard but I found having fun easy .
Friday, 8 June 2018
New Badges
This week for literacy we have been creating new badges by using the learn, create, share process to make them. It was really hard especially using the feedback that I was given by other people because It was mostly good but I did use it .
Monday, 21 May 2018
My christmas
This week for literacy we have been writing about celebrations that we do at home . I wrote a story about my Christmas at home and I would like to show you it.
I think I have a very different Christmas to everyone else I hope you agree that my Christmas is very different and fun.
The way I celebrate Christmas
“Christmas” I screamed as I jumped out of my comfy bed .
First my brother and I get up at about half past five to wake our mum or dad up so we can open our spectacular presents .
Next our mum/dad get up and let us open our smallest presents usually for me it is a small teddy or something like that it’s
always so exciting.
always so exciting.
After that we have Breakfast well when I say breakfast I mean brunch. For brunch we have amazing pancakes, juicy bacon
and amazing scrambled eggs yum yum .
and amazing scrambled eggs yum yum .
Later that day around lunch time we got to open the rest of our presents we always get one really huge one I always get really
excited about the biggest one .
excited about the biggest one .
At around six o’clock we had diner for dinner we had roast chicken roast potatoes and mixed vegetables I was craving to eat it .
I think I have a very different Christmas to everyone else I hope you agree that my Christmas is very different and fun.
Wednesday, 11 April 2018
Monsters are real
This week my literacy group have been writing persuasive arguments about ether monsters are real or monsters are fake I chose real and I wrote about it .
I think that you should believe that monsters are real . Did you know that even if you have never seen
a monster before … it's coming for you?
a monster before … it's coming for you?
Monsters come into your room and drain out your energy in the middle of the night .That's why
sometimes you feel tired when you wake up .
sometimes you feel tired when you wake up .
In the deepest darkness of the night, bed bugs grow and grow until they are twice the size of you and
suck out all your blood!
suck out all your blood!
They hide in the dark under your bed until the day of Halloween . Then they jump out and scare you out of your pants .
Lots of people say monsters aren't real but if you have you ever heard a weird noise it's because there's
a monster under your bed .
a monster under your bed .
So as you can see monsters are real. Next time you go to bed, check underneath it. Trust me .
Thursday, 22 March 2018
A bunyip in a billabong
My literacy group have been reading the big book "Bunyip in the Billabong" and also we've been writing persuasive writing so we decided to mix them together and write a persuasive argument. In the bunyip or townspeople perspective I chose the bunyip's perspective and wrote about it .
Dear Townspeople,
I believe that I have to stay in your billabong .
Did you know that I am the last bunyip in the entire galaxy?
There are many ways I can help your village be great.
Firstly I can come to your kids birthday party and give kids rides , do magic and make a cake .
Another reason is I could easily help you if your town got attacked by aliens. I would show them my
big beady eyes and my snapping jaws and scratching claws .
big beady eyes and my snapping jaws and scratching claws .
Also I could be a big attraction to tourists. They would pay for souvenirs and you would get a lot of money .
Lots of people say that there are more bunyips in the universe but , I came through 15 galaxies to get to
this world. You can’t kick me out!
this world. You can’t kick me out!
As you can see I need to stay in your billabong and I can be very useful .
Sincerely the Bunyip
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