Simple to Complex Sentences
The dog ate.
The dog ate miserably.
This morning the dog ate miserably.
This morning the dog ate out of the trash miserably.
THis morning the dog ate out of the trash shivering miserably.
Tuesday, 3 March 2020
Simple to Complex Sentences
Today we did a practice for our assessment (test) and working to improve and make our writing more interesting. We practised making our sentences better by changing them from simple to complex sentences. We would add a word or two every time we change a sentence so it would become more interesting. Here are the sentences that I changed.
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hi aliyah this is really good i also like this post
ReplyDeleteGreat work, Aliyah. Your last sentence makes me feel terrible about the plight of this suffering dog.
ReplyDeleteHi Mr Collins I also feel bad for the dog but I wanted my story to unique and I am really happy with how sentence turned out
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