I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
This week for literacy we have been told to make a wanted poster . I have made one about my teacher Mrs Jack I found it hard to make the photo but I found it easy to write how she makes my day .
Hi Aliyah, Hannah Here. I like the way you made the drawing yourself! It reminds me of when I saw the wanted signs in Punui-o-toka. Next time could you make the background a pasty yellow and golden to make it look like the real paper. What kind of smile would she put on your face?
Hi Aliyah, Hannah here. Thank you for replying. To make it better, you could make the name (Mrs Jack) A bit bigger. How did you make the picture? Come check out my blog, it is https://shshannahj.blogspot.com/ anyway Talk to you later!
Hi Hannah thank you for visiting my blog I made the picture using sumo paint . Sorry I can't make the name bigger there is no room. one question do you like my blurb at the top or at the bottom ?
Hi Aliyah, Hannah here. Thank you for replying. It´s ok that you can´t make the name bigger. How do you get to Sumo Paint on a Chromebook? Anyways, talk to you later.
Hi Hannah , Aliyah here thank you for understanding the way you get to sumo paint is there is a button of a face by screencastify click on it enable flash and you are on .do you like the font I used to write her name ?
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
Hi Aliyah, Hannah Here. I like the way you made the drawing yourself! It reminds me of when I saw the wanted signs in Punui-o-toka. Next time could you make the background a pasty yellow and golden to make it look like the real paper. What kind of smile would she put on your face?
ReplyDeletehi Hannah thank you for commenting on my blog . When Mrs jack puts a smile on my face it is a happy on . how can I make my post better.
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ReplyDeleteHi Aliyah, Hannah here. Thank you for replying. To make it better, you could make the name (Mrs Jack) A bit bigger. How did you make the picture? Come check out my blog, it is https://shshannahj.blogspot.com/ anyway Talk to you later!
ReplyDeleteHi Hannah thank you for visiting my blog I made the picture using sumo paint . Sorry I can't make the name bigger there is no room. one question do you like my blurb at the top or at the bottom ?
DeleteHi Aliyah, Hannah here. Thank you for replying. It´s ok that you can´t make the name bigger. How do you get to Sumo Paint on a Chromebook? Anyways, talk to you later.
ReplyDeleteHi Hannah , Aliyah here thank you for understanding the way you get to sumo paint is there is a button of a face by screencastify click on it enable flash and you are on .do you like the font I used to write her name ?
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