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Monday, 7 December 2020

Heroes and villains writing

 This term in hur 4 we have been writing a story based on the theme "Heroes and Villains". We planed our story on a slideshow and then we wrote it in a shared document. I never finished mine but I plan to at some point. here is my plan and story so far.


It all started on a peaceful wednesday evening just as the sun was tipping over the horizon as the village of the sun was packing up for the night as everyone fell asleep not knowing what would happen the next day.


As the sun rose the next day, Phoenix got up and got ready for training. they slowly put on their armour and then dragged them self to the kitchen to eat breakfast, Cyra was already there making breakfast for them all,

“Morning Phoenix”

Blaze exclaimed,

“Uhh what umm, Hi Blaze, whats for breakfast”

Phoenix replied,

Cyra said,

“Pancakes”

“Mmm yummy”

Blaze said excitedly.

Once Cyra had finished making the pancakes, Phoenix and blaze devoured them in 5 minutes and went out to train,

“I’ll be out in 10 Minutes”

Cyra yelled across the room.


Meanwhile in the forest the starclan was planning trying to figure out a way to destroy the sun clan. After thinking for a while Shadow finally blurted out,

“ I know how to defeat them”

Moon Said sarcastically,

“Oh wow another one of your great plans we will totally defeat them this time”

Shadow replied,

“ No this time is will actually work, we just need to find a way to get inside the village”

Luna exclaim,

“That ain't happening unless one of us dresses up and dyes their hair like them blond and bright also we need contacts”

“ I know exactly how we can get in”

Shadow said sinisterly.

“ OH COME ON”

Moon cried

“ You said it would be the only way didn't you Moon”

Said Shadow

“Yes”

Moon replied,

Luna walked in and Laughed

“ HA HA HA HA HA HA HA what are you wearing moon”

The sun clans uniform

Moon replied

“And your hair its blond and you have blue eyes”

Luna said Laughing

SO WHAT YOUR HAIR IS BLUE”

Moon yelled

“ yeah it's pretty “

Luna said


Back in the village.

“Wow it's even a quiet month normally the star clan would have attacked at least once by now”

Phoenix exclaimed 

“DON’T JINX IT”

Blaze yelled

“Ok ok”

Phoenix said

“Excuse me”

“AHH AHH WHOS THERE”

Blaze screamed

“Oh sorry if I startled you”

Moon said in the sweetest voice she could pull of

“Who are you”

Phoenix said while pointing their sword at her

“Oh I’m um Alina nice to meet you”

Exclaimed Moon still using the sweet voice.

“Ok ima get some lunch”

Blaze said

“Hi I'm Phoenix”

Phoenix said while sticking their hand out to greet Alina ( Moon )

“Oh I know who you are”

Moon said

Moon put a bag over Phoenix's head Phoenix tried to scream but nothing came out, Moon knocked out Phoenix and dragged them back to their base

“Here they are “ 

Moon said while lugging phoenix along

“Took long enough”

Shadow scowled

“Whatever lets just get them into the cell”

Luna said

But shadow yelled before they could do anything

“Wait do they have anything on them to contact the other clan”

“Not that I can see”

Moon replied

“Good chuck them in a cell, we need to go raid a village”


“BEEP BEEP BEEP”

“THE ALARM, COME ON GUYS”

Blaze screamed

“Where's Phoenix”

Cyra exclaimed

“I don't know but it doesn't matter we have to fight”

Blaze and Cyra ran outside only to see the worst thing imaginable


With sword in hand and armor on body Blaze yelled

“BACK OF OR WE WILL CALL PHOENIX AND THEY WILL DEFEAT YOU”

“You can’t though we have them right here”

Shadow said 

“No Phoenix”

Blaze cried.

If you want them back, defeat us and this time your pity excuses for an attack is nothing without Phoenix.

Shadow called from inside the mech


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