Today for the Uru Manuka Learning journey I made an acrostic poem about my Favourite animal, a unicorn.
first I wrote unicorn down the side of my piece of paper then I wrote the poem after that Added details last I made sure everything looked right and I published it on my blog.
I found it easy and fun to do the details but I found it hard to write the poem.
I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Aliyah I thought that was a really good idea to do an acrostic poem,Maybe next time you could either make sure the picture is clearer or write in your blurb the poem because I couldn't really read it that well. But you made it really clear on what animal/mythical creature you were doing by including it in your labels and in your blurb. This reminds me of when I write poems in my spare time about things I like.
ReplyDeleteHi Ayla
DeleteThank you for commenting on my blog. I tried to make the picture clearer but I couldn't because i was using my Chromebook,.Your right I should write it in my blurb because you can't see it very well.
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