The Portal

This week we wrote story's in buddy's I was with Dylan . There was a  catch to this though, we could not talk other than through comments This was really hard. First we planed, next we wrote the story, Then we edited and finally we shared it with someone else and they gave us feed back.

I found it easy to use my imagination and write the story but I found it hard not talking.


Intro One bright and sunny day Aliyah and Dylan were playing in the forest, But then a mysterious portal appeared out of nowhere. With a look of caution on their faces they slowly walked up to it to examine it. It was like a galaxy, so beautiful but it felt unnatural but in a spur of a moment it started sucking things in, taking Aliyah and Dylan with it. . .

 They appeared in a forest that looked really old and the trees were rotten, They walked along the path that was covered in leaves and then Aliyah said “ wow this is creepy “.Then Aliyah pointed at a bridge, it had a creature that look like a frog mixed with a (cat frog) out the front looking very angry. He pulled a pointy stick out of his bag and pointed it at Dylan, “WHAT DO YOU WANT” the creature shouted, Dylan said “We appeared in this world and we have to get out” he nodded and said “You have to complete this riddle to get past the bridge” he gave Dylan a piece of paper and it said “It comes once in a minute twice in a moment but never in one thousand years”. Dylan and Aliyah looked at each other with a puzzled look and Aliyah said “I’ve Got it!” and she walked up to the creature and whispered “the letter M” and the creature nodded and said “well done you may pass”. He opened the gate and said “Bye Bye” Dylan and Aliyah waved and walked through.

 Suddenly they felt a shiver down their spines and their eyes lit up rainbow and they hovered in the air then they landed back on the ground but something felt different... They looked at each other and screamed “AHHH”.They looked so different Dylan was was wearing a blue superhero outfit and could shoot Ice out his hands Aliyah was wearing a purple dress and could shoot lightning they both were wearing masks one blue one purple.

They kept walking until they found an old railroad with a dragon guarding it. Behind the Dragon they saw a crystal shard it was glowing rainbow, it was the unicorn shard. They tried to attack the dragon but it didn’t work they couldn’t figure out why . Until they realised they had to work together Aliyah said” i’ll shoot a lightning bolt” and Dylan said “I’ll shoot ice”. Aliyah shot lightning and Dylan shot ice It hit the dragon and “BANG” the dragon fell dead Aliyah said “with the power of teamwork we can do anything“ then Dylan said “ your so cheesy” and so they jumped on top of the dragon and did the floss to celebrate. After they finished flossing they ran over to the unicorn shard, grabbed it, held it up and they yelled “TAKE US BACK” and they teleport back to their world .“That was fun!” said Aliyah they ran inside to their parents and told them all about it but they didn’t believe them, Aliyah and Dylan never played in that forest again…