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Thursday, 13 June 2019

Rhyming

This week in literacy we wrote a story using repetitive rhyming. First we planed then we wrote it it was hard to write it but it was fun  last we made a drawing and published it.
I found it easy to have fun and be creative but I found it hard to write the story .

There once was a cat who loved the sound “rat a tat tat”.

But the sound made here a brat. The cat loved the sound rat a tat tat but it made her a brat.

The people didn’t like that she was a brat so they put him in a habitat. The cat loved the sound rat a tat tat but it made her a brat ,so now she is in a habitat.

The cat doesn’t like being in a habitat so she became an acrobat.The cat loved the sound rat a tat tat but it made her a brat, so now she is in a habitat and is an acrobat.

The cat can’t do acrobatics so she went “splat”.The cat loved the sound rat a tat tat but it made her a brat, so she is now in a habitat and is an acrobat, but she went “splat”.

The cat stopped doing acrobats because she found a soft mat. The cat loved the sound rat a tat tat but it made her a brat, so she is now in a habitat and is an acrobat, but she went “splat” so she stopped and now in a soft mat.

She got up because she saw a little Gray rat.The cat loved the sound rat a tat tat but it made her a brat, so now she is in a habitat and is an acrobat ,but she went “splat” so she stopped and is now in a soft mat spying on a grey rat.

The rat is being a copycat.The cat loved the sound rat a tat tat but it made her a brat, so now she is in a habitat and is an acrobat ,but she went “splat” so she stopped and is now in a soft mat ,spying on a grey rat and is mad because it is a copycat.

A person saw the cat and gave her a pat.The cat loved the sound rat a tat tat but it made her a brat, so now she is in a habitat and is an acrobat, but she went “splat” so she stopped and is now in a soft mat spying on a grey rat and is mad because it is a copycat but a person gave her a pat.

She found a great big hat.The cat loved the sound rat a tat tat but it made her a brat, so now she is in a habitat and is an acrobat but she went “splat” so she stopped and is now in a soft mat spying on a grey rat and is mad because the rat is a copycat but a person gave her a pat and she is wearing a big hat.

The cat got bit by a bat.The cat loved the sound rat a tat tat but it made her a brat, so now she is in a habitat and is an acrobat but she went “splat” so she stopped and is now in a soft mat spying on a grey rat and is mad because the rat is a copycat but a person gave her a pat and she is wearing a big hat and she got bit by a bat.

People come from far and wide to see her little face, and now she realises that shes not a just big disgrace, She changes back to normal and is not so paranormal and now she can be very informal for people that are round, to be themselves not someone else and believe that you can be you no matter what.

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