I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
This week in literacy we have been changing lyrics to the song nobody likes me to make it positive . I found it challenging and hard to write the the lyrics but I found it easy to work with my friends .
I like the way you turned a song into your own. I think next time you´re doing a song maybe make the slide time go a bit slower but I like the colours. it reminded me of the worm song.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
I like the way you turned a song into your own.
ReplyDeleteI think next time you´re doing a song maybe make the slide time go a bit slower but I like the colours. it reminded me of the worm song.