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Friday, 9 March 2018

The magical mystery door

In literacy I have been learning about using wow words and vocabulary for impact .
We looked at a image and thought critically about it . We used lots of reflective questions to think about it I found it challenging to think about the start and the end .

The magical mystery door


This story starts on a wet springs day where I just moved into my new house . So I explored
the house ,I found this tiny door in the hallway So I opened it I stuck my hand in because it was
way too small to put my whole body in .


I wasn't sure who made the door but there were traces of Glitter and fur from a cat .
Inside of the door I felt two Potions so I took one But the door shut I didn't know what happened
but I pulled it and it broke it splashed all over me and made me turn miniature .

Then I saw a
button it would have been too tiny for me to press when I was still big So I pressed it it made
the ladder extend and made it big enough for me to climb . I open the door and a portal was
inside of it so I walked in and the portal sent me to the middle of a maze .


After  a day of searching the maze seemed endless and I had no food no water and no place
for me to sleep until I found a chest with some water and some plain biscuits then I thought
to myself It wasn't the best but it would do for now .
After three days of searching I found a regular size door but I couldn't open it until I found a little button I mean come on it was smaller than me so I pressed it  opened the door and I saw a land made of candy and fluffy kittens with wings and pink fluffy unicorns dancing on a rainbow so I stayed there forever then I woke up It was just a dream . . . or was it .

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