My literacy group have been reading the big book "Bunyip in the Billabong" and also we've been writing persuasive writing so we decided to mix them together and write a persuasive argument. In the bunyip or townspeople perspective I chose the bunyip's perspective and wrote about it .
Dear Townspeople,
I believe that I have to stay in your billabong .
Did you know that I am the last bunyip in the entire galaxy?
There are many ways I can help your village be great.
Firstly I can come to your kids birthday party and give kids rides , do magic and make a cake .
Another reason is I could easily help you if your town got attacked by aliens. I would show them my
big beady eyes and my snapping jaws and scratching claws .
big beady eyes and my snapping jaws and scratching claws .
Also I could be a big attraction to tourists. They would pay for souvenirs and you would get a lot of money .
Lots of people say that there are more bunyips in the universe but , I came through 15 galaxies to get to
this world. You can’t kick me out!
this world. You can’t kick me out!
As you can see I need to stay in your billabong and I can be very useful .
Sincerely the Bunyip
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