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Today in Writing (Hur 3) we were given a 'Who, what, where, when' prompt. We were instructed to write some sort of writing involving these 4 things, A person and a beast, a light source, 2:30 am and a dark forest. Here is the final product of my poem. If you enjoy it or have any feedback for me, please comment.
Walking through a dark forest,
Trees looming over me,
Leaves under my feet crunching,
This feeling is overwhelming.
I hear a noise,
My steps freeze,
‘Its nothing’ I thought,
‘It's just a gentle breeze’.
I continue walking,
My pace is speeding up,
My torch seems to go flat,
And I don’t have a backup.
Time seems to go on forever,
I look down at my phone
2:30 am, an uncomfortable time
I hate being alone
I can almost see the end of this dark and dreary forest,
But something stops me, though I don't want to stay,
‘Stay here, we’re your friends now,’
This voice seems to sway.
A hand reaches out to me,
‘Stay with me’ It pled
So I took it by the hand,
And into the darkness I was led.
Aliyah
ReplyDeleteOMG. that is an outstanding poem.. I love it
Tau kē!!!!
I want to see more of your writing...
Mr Sutton
DeleteThank you for commenting on my blog
Writing is a very enjoyable thing for me and I do quite a lot of it so hopefuly you will be able to see more in the future.