Persuasive writing (Fireworks ahould be banned)

Hello everyone,

For the first week of term in writing we were working on our persuasive writing skills, we were told to write about wether we thought firework should be banned or not. I worked with Isabella to make this peice of writing about why we belive fire works should be banned.

Fireworks should be banned

Do you like fireworks?

Well here are our reasons why we believe, you shouldn't use them

Although fireworks are in fact very pretty and can bring others closer it does pose a hazard when it comes to flammability since it releases sparks of fire from the gunpowder that if it’s around grass if there's enough of it can set the ground aflame. Since most people don’t keep water or a fire extinguisher around them while doing this it can be deadly.

Secondly, fireworks contain materials that are able to be used in other circumstances and can be useful (like different chemicals). If we use these in fireworks we could run out of the things used to make them when we need them in different situations. They also tend to cost a lot of money which can be used for other, more important things. Considering in this day and age everything is getting more expensive (which will include fireworks) putting that money into a bank account to save it would be much better in the long run.

Thirdly, fireworks tend to be loud, really loud. Loud noises tend to be bad for animals and can send them into shock, hurting them and maybe even killing them. Different animals can be useful in terms of nature and to society so if they die that would be very bad.

Thus we believe that fireworks should be banned