The marvellous moon landing

For the past few weeks we have been writing a moment in time. The moment in time we are writing about is either being Neil Armstrong or a kid watching it on TV. I chose a kid watching it on TV.

I found it hard to do the writing I found it easy to have fun.

3,2,1, BLAST OF

Today is the day of the first amazing and spectacular moon landing, I’m
sitting on my couch drinking hot chocolate in the comfort of my own home. I can see
the shiny new rocket blasting off. I can hear the engines starting and then suddenly
“ WOOSH “ the rocket was launching. I smiled and started shouting “It launched !
It launched ! It launched. 

The rocket is about to land and I can feel a cold shiver down my spine. The house fell silent
just waiting for the legs of the ship to hit the ground. The legs hit the ground and I
sceamed” Apollo 11 mission accomplished”

I felt exhilarated It was amazing seeing the first moon landing, I felt like I was the most
special person on earth watching it happen live. I was squealing with joy as I was jumping up
and down. My face lit up as I heard “Neil Armstrong, we have landed “ 

I could see the dusty gray moon as Neil Armstrong set foot on the moon. There were lots
of craters that looked like someone had dug out holes on a gray beach. Then I heard
“one small step for man, one big leap for mankind” . I was ecstatic, a tremendous smile
stretched across my face as I squealed with excitement.

Neil Armstrong got back in the rocket and, “BSHEEW” it blasted off again falling back
down to earth and “BANG” it comes down from the atmosphere and a parachute comes
out   and slowly but surely hits the water “ SPLASH”.

It was late at night and the moon was out I looked out the window and wondered
” will I ever be an astronaut like Neil armstrong, will I ever land on the moon or Mars or
any other planet.” I went to bed with a smile on my face, dreaming of the day I would land
on the moon.