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Thursday, 21 March 2019

Hide and seek

This week in Mr Breaches literacy we found a hiding spot and wrote either to entertain, inform of guide your readers to your hiding spot. I found it easy because I enjoy writing about anything and I like to be over dramatic. I found using different words from the thesaurus challenging.

Dear diary 20/3/19 1:55 pm
I’m playing hide and seek today I think I have a marvellous hiding spot.


Dear diary 20/3/19 2:15 pm
I’ve been hiding here for about 20 minutes now I think I’m going to win.


Dear diary 20/3/19 2:35 pm
I can hear people yelling “ where are you Aliyah”,and, I can’t find you.


Dear diary 20/3/19 3:00 pm
It has been about a hour still I am unfound.


Dear diary 20/3/19 3:45 pm
My legs are starting to hurt from standing up so long I don’t know how much longer I will last.


Dear diary 20/3/19 4:00 pm
I’m sitting down now and it’s starting to smell in here .


Dear diary 20/3/19 4:45 pm
I think everyone has left school and I am starting to get hungry and thirsty.


Dear diary 20/3/19 4:50 pm
I just realised I am an idiot I brought my diary and a pen but no food or water.


Dear diary 20/3/19 5:30 pm
I am very tired I think I will go to sleep soon.


Dear diary 20/3/19 6:00 pm
I’m going to go to sleep now But it will be very uncomfortable.


Dear diary 21/3/19 7:00 am

I just woke up and It was a very rough night

Dear diary 21/3/19 8:00 am
People are looking for me now I still can’t believe I haven't been found yet


Dear diary 21/3/19 8:30 am
The first bell just rang and I can hear rain starting to come down.


Dear diary 21/3/19 9:00 am
Everyone is inside and the teachers are doing the roll.


Dear diary 21/3/19 10:30 am
It’s morning tea and the rain has stopped.


Dear diary 21/3/19 11:00 am
The bell just rang and every one is going back inside for literacy.


Dear diary 21/3/19 12:30 pm
Everyone is coming back outside and I am about starting to worry.


Dear diary 21/3/19 1:00 pm
I got found but think I made a new world record for the longest hide and seek match ever.











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