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Friday, 16 June 2017

My queen bee







It was late into the evening when the magic happened.
The forest was the perfect place for a story to unfold. A sense of mystery filled the secluded wood, as a swirling, grey fog mischievously crept its way between the trees.After days of waiting, her transformation was complete. The Queen Bee held one of her many children in her outstretched hand; the moment she’d been waiting for had finally arrived . . .

She forgot who she was then she saw a bee siting and waiting . But moments before that bee left it landed on her hand with it’s wings stretched out gracefully behind its back and that bee whispered to her . . . when you sit upon a flower you will find out who you really are she wondered is this myth really true . So later that evening she sat upon a mossy  log  where a flower lied in front of her and she said please tell me who I really am  then . . . she turns to a bee she remembered who she really was so she joined the rest of the bees for the rest of the night . In the morning she was human again and she wondered was that just a dream ?

2 comments:


  1. The part that stood out was the dark dress and the big bees.

    This is a good pitcher you picked because it stands out really well.

    Next time, you could your’s more people in the pitcher.
    Added a question?
    Did you get to pick your photo?

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  2. Maybe next time do some more pictures because I don't understand the picture ???
    How did you do it because...I think maybe next time you could swap the story starter and put it was a dark night and there was a girl with bees.
    Did you think about...trying to go to the bees house in your dreams.
    This shined because…it is so beautiful and when i was scrolling I saw it.

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