I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
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Tuesday, 21 August 2018
Unicorn poem
For the past week in literacy we have been writing poems so far we have done limericks ,acrostic poems and Cinquain poems at first I thought it was hard but I kept persisting and now I have lots of poems , If I am exact I now have 27 poems here is one of my favourites that I would like to show you .
Anonymous
Hello Aliyah Hannah here, I love the way you put in a Unicorn background. It reminds me that Unicorns are my favorite animal. Next time could you put the font bigger and a different color.
ReplyDeleteOK Hannah thank you for the advice
Deleteclever lil girl ... looks and sounds fantastic
ReplyDeleteagain thank you daddy
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